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Her Father's Daughter
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Her Father's Daughter
Bushi. Artisan. Duelist. Magistrate. Hatamoto.
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Re: Her Father's Daughter
Loved it! Don't want to spoil anything, but it was simply great.
"I am sure this will be a most interesting year."
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I liked, but think the writing could use some editing. I'm picky
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I've got 99 problems but a duel ain't one!
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Re: Her Father's Daughter
What bothers me most about the writing is the occasional use of "hai" or "-ue" and things like this.
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"I am sure this will be a most interesting year."
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Re: Her Father's Daughter
I was hoping to see more differences from Hotaru than Hoturi, and they may come eventually. The fiction itself was fine, I was slightly disappointed all in all. Hopefully she doesn't just end up being a Hoturi clone.
Crane Clan · Samurai · Yojimbo · Tactician
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I was Ikoma Shinju at WC3, Daidoji Reiji at WC4
Top 8, Richmond VA Kotei 2015
Top 8, Charlotte NC Kotei 2015
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Re: Her Father's Daughter
While we're on the subject, is Hotaru's use of "-dono" appropriate toward Bayushi Kachiko, Imperial Advisor? I thought -dono was reserved specifically for superiors in your own chain
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Crane Clan · Samurai · Yojimbo · Tactician
I was Ikoma Shinju at WC3, Daidoji Reiji at WC4
Top 8, Richmond VA Kotei 2015
Top 8, Charlotte NC Kotei 2015
I was Ikoma Shinju at WC3, Daidoji Reiji at WC4
Top 8, Richmond VA Kotei 2015
Top 8, Charlotte NC Kotei 2015
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Re: Her Father's Daughter
At least, this story recanonizes two of the big three Imperial-era Crane characters (Toshimoko and Yoshi). Only Uji missing now from the Crane all-stars lineup.
(Okay, and Reju)
(Okay, and Reju)
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Re: Her Father's Daughter
Ceterum autem censeo Otomines esse delendam.
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