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Courts of the Crane Clan • Her Father's Daughter
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Her Father's Daughter

Posted: Wed May 17, 2017 7:08 am
by Kakita Shiro

Re: Her Father's Daughter

Posted: Wed May 17, 2017 8:07 am
by Doji Makoto
Loved it! Don't want to spoil anything, but it was simply great.

Re: Her Father's Daughter

Posted: Wed May 17, 2017 9:27 am
by Kakita Onimaru
I liked, but think the writing could use some editing. I'm picky

Re: Her Father's Daughter

Posted: Wed May 17, 2017 9:35 am
by Doji Makoto
What bothers me most about the writing is the occasional use of "hai" or "-ue" and things like this.

Re: Her Father's Daughter

Posted: Wed May 17, 2017 9:35 am
by Daidoji Reiji
I was hoping to see more differences from Hotaru than Hoturi, and they may come eventually. The fiction itself was fine, I was slightly disappointed all in all. Hopefully she doesn't just end up being a Hoturi clone.

Re: Her Father's Daughter

Posted: Wed May 17, 2017 2:28 pm
by Corbeau

Re: Her Father's Daughter

Posted: Wed May 17, 2017 6:56 pm
by MirumotoDaisuke
While we're on the subject, is Hotaru's use of "-dono" appropriate toward Bayushi Kachiko, Imperial Advisor? I thought -dono was reserved specifically for superiors in your own chain

Re: Her Father's Daughter

Posted: Thu May 18, 2017 5:18 am
by Daidoji Reiji

Re: Her Father's Daughter

Posted: Thu May 18, 2017 5:47 am
by Himoto
At least, this story recanonizes two of the big three Imperial-era Crane characters (Toshimoko and Yoshi). Only Uji missing now from the Crane all-stars lineup.

(Okay, and Reju)

Re: Her Father's Daughter

Posted: Thu May 18, 2017 6:04 am
by Daidoji Tacticus